teaser tuesday

January 6, 2010

Even though I’m a serious newbie there, I’m butting my way into the Absolute Write YA Teaser Tuesday, cause it looks like fun. Here goeses.

Oh, and, a note: ‘college’ in Australia means high school.

*snipped*

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8 Responses to “teaser tuesday”

  1. Kaitlin Says:

    This was nicely written. I enjoyed it!

  2. oldpeoplewritingforteens Says:

    Great voice! Glad you decided to join TT! 🙂

  3. Becca Says:

    Ack! Sorry! That was my comment above. *winces*

  4. CupofDice Says:

    Nice job, especially the conversational tone. Can’t wait to read more. 🙂

  5. Angie Says:

    Nicely written and so familiar. I think we’ve all been on that bench at some point, wanting to say something but not and then regretting it. Nice tease!

  6. Bee Says:

    This is so sweet. Me likes!
    I like the flow, the voice, the situation…it’s so relatable 😀

  7. Kathy Says:

    Yay! Finally another Aussie 🙂
    This reads really well. Nice pace, nice description of the characters.

  8. DH Kuypers Says:

    The two-line conversation is really funny. Good writing, too! Welcome to Teaser Tuesday : ))


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